lenards said: I know the "who" - but where and when (well, what time on Nov. 15, 2008)?
I like the icon balancing you've done with the top and bottom corners.
I think Install Fest should be much bigger. Lots of information there, but your eye gets lost and the logos are really the anchors... when you need the eye to flow from the AZ LoCo logo to "InstallFest" so that people are attracted to it informed of the "what."
I don't know if the "What's New" really hooks anyway. That's something that might be a hook to something that, say, had Edgy Eft installed and is thinking about going back. But is that group the focus? Is the flyer meant to bring in new people? Is it meant to bring in someone that's tired of Vista and wants to get help setting up Ubuntu? I'm not sure this appeals to the people you're hoping to draw in.
I don't mean to be totally negative. I think the content is good, the layout is solid, but some of the above adjustments might help attract the desired people.
lenards
You're not being negative. One point - the left hand side is pretty much for people who might become interested in upgrading to Intrepid Ibex. The right hand side gives the reasons that someone might want to change from that "other OS" to Ubuntu. So we're actually reaching out to both.
Yes, InstallFest can be increased in size. That, along with the location would be done at one shot, since I'd be stealing the space from the font size of the text on the right hand side.
I'll keep your suggestions in mind, and see about coming up with a revision in a couple of days. Thanks.